[FIC] TSB: Renegade -- Chapter 2

[carcinya]

Title: The Silent Blade: Renegade
Genre: Romance/Action/Adventure

Summary: As his lover find himself caught in a deadly whirlwind of political intrigue that leads Konoha to the brink of war, former Hunter Iruka must risk everything to protect what he holds dear. Just how far would you go to defend what is yours? [KakaIru, Book 2]

Comments: Betaed by Noods. Thank you!
Status: In progress.

(TSB: Renegade -- Chapter 2: "Fall to pieces")

Feedback more than welcome, as usual! *anxious*

PS: bronzetigress, telosphilos, my dears -- don't worry, I will post a new, edited version as soon as I hear from you. (I just couldn't wait! *bows very low* So sorry!)

Comments

[kiasca.livejournal.com]

Yay!! new chapter *runs off to read*

[telosphilos.livejournal.com]

Mea Culpa! Mea Culpa!

I'm so sorry. Things got chaotic. My only big critique of this chapter is the end. To me the end of the chapter seemed to come out of nowhere. I don't understand why Kakashi did what he did.

Now that could be a good thing for all I know. Have fun doing me in with the next chapter.

[carcinya.livejournal.com]

No, that's okay! There's no hurry, as I told you. :) I simply couldn't wait any longer. *hugs*

Actually, that IS the point. No one understands why Kakashi is acting that way. *winks* Though I daresay I left quite a few hints throughout the chapter...

[bronzetigress.livejournal.com]

Check your in-box. :)

And I've got at *least* a couple of ideas why Kakashi's doing that... *hee* It *seems* quite surprising, but having read through several times there's certainly enough warning... The hints are there, don't worry! But they're small and spread out well. It's good, though. :)

[carcinya.livejournal.com]

Thanks! :) *goes back to work on chapter 3*