[FIC] TSB: Renegade -- Chapter 4

[carcinya]

Title: The Silent Blade: Renegade
Genre: Romance/Action/Adventure

Summary: As his lover finds himself caught in a deadly whirlwind of political intrigue that leads Konoha to the brink of war, former Hunter Iruka must risk everything to protect what he holds dear. Just how far would you go to defend what is yours? [KakaIru, Book 2]

Comments: Betaed by Noods, telosphilos and tatsumaki
Status: In progress.

(TSB: Renegade -- Chapter 4: "Full of Sun")

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Previous chapters

[Book 1] [Chapter 1] [Chapter 2] [Chapter 3]

Comments

[telosphilos.livejournal.com]

It is incredibly awesome when I can't predict where a story is going to go. I love it because it keeps me on my toes. Most of the time, I'm afraid I can guess several chapters ahead. The mountain clan/desert clan thing I would never have guessed and yet it explains a lot about your Iruka. He's walking the line between both cultures and cultural identities, no wonder he's conflicted. Of course since you say everyone is wrong then Kakashi must have something completely right or else be feeling the effects of an extremely messy genjutsu or been replaced with a copy cat who is taking advantage of the situation.

The kiddos say hi btw. Maeve with a messy face, Alex with a quick grin, and Vivienne with a poopy diaper. Life is messy at my house. It's a good sort of messy when they aren't mixing it up.

[carcinya.livejournal.com]

*waves* Hi, kids! *smiles*